Lo! A seed is sown,
a little plant is grown with
its roots deeper than
ocean - flowers bloomed,
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Love both of these verses. It's also wonderful that you experiment with the different forms of writing of poetry, which is something I haven't been brave enough to try yet! Kudos to you!
Beautiful Poem. Both the verses for life tree and heart tree is wonderful. Very true said life tree spread down to it's roots deeper than ocean and branches spread country wide, while heart tree is filled with heavy tons of words, which needed a lorry to carry. Thank for the notes, something new I can learn..loved reading it.
Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment on the poem ππππ