A Life That Is Heading Nowhere Comments

........u are deeply affected the by world exposed to you, that's what makes this piece a powerful write

LIKEEEEE.......this one.......again perfect Elli! ! ! .........i sometimes wonder; what does God think about this world and the creation he once made with lots of hop and love....did he knew its end.....(well.of course he did!) ......................and that he is sooooooooooooooooooooooo patient! ! ! !

great.the one who kills one is a murderer but the one who kills lot of people is a hero.~nb

Very nice, Ellias. There are so many things wrong... that should be fixed! Terry

There is great physical and spiritual misery in our world. Keep writing about these topics, you seem to be in sympathy with trying to find solutions and make the world a better place to live. Your idealism is catagious.

a teen boy has such high thinking. no matter, keep it up and enjoy the life. keep it up with ur study

Noble heart, very smart and nice soul to write this poem, that's good my friend..keep it up.._Unwritten Soul