Sunday, October 28, 2007

A Life Story Comments

Rating: 3.5

Patience is needed for these days
though patience rarely ever pays.
Perhaps you will, through circumstance
have time to make important plans.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Alison Cassidy 02 November 2007

You write your story with style and a skillful use of rhyme and rhythm which is to be expected in a wordsmith of your stature. May your struggle over disappointment be rewarded on Tuesday. Jerry and I are keeping everything crossed for a positive outcome. This is certainly a superb account of your sad and sorry tale. love, Allie xxxx

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Obviously I'm rooting for ya. And what a piece to do it with! All X'd... t x

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Herbert Nehrlich1 28 October 2007

Thanks, Theo. I posted it here since I didn't know where else to store it. H

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