Thursday, April 23, 2009

A Life Revisited Comments

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I thought that I was here before
And may have passed this way
It all looks so familiar
The returning of a day
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William Lindenmuth
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Barb Coleman 14 May 2010

I loved this poem william, as I have been ' In another space in time'! I guess I learned of the simple things in life that made me happy. I only need nature, a house and water. Had a garden in my other space in time. But peace was really what I found, even though my existance was meager, I was happy.

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Adeline Foster 03 June 2009

dancing with remembrances- What a wonderful line. Enjoy your work very much. Adeline

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 27 April 2009

Like a moment of forever, frozen here in time - Wonderful -most of us have been at this place before but not dancing so happily with the rememberances or walking with the memories as you do... Great write

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Sandra Fowler 27 April 2009

'Like a moment of forever'...what an excellent line. May you have many such moments.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sonya Florentino 25 April 2009

a 'deja vu' of your own life... great introspection...

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Susan Bagley 24 April 2009

Dancing with rememberances and walking with memories. Wow, I love this Bill. It is going into my favorites today. thank you for sharing this and I think most of us have been at this place before. That DeJaVu feeling and makes us turn introspective. I loved it. Susan

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William Lindenmuth

William Lindenmuth

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