On a perfectly cemented floor
a crack on it said a lot more
who ever tapped on its door
for a sprout of grass to peep out door
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i enjoyed the for you used. and of course the wording is super.
God uses imperfect men To make fruitful lives Poet friend You remind me of Water turning to Wine From the Ordinary Something Extraordinary Will happen if onyl We let God into our life, As my father usually says! A wonderful and wise poem To be read in the silence Of each ones heart! Angel
May be a pipal or banyan...as Mr.Rajaram has put it..'one seed gives thousands of seeds '...pipal and banyan are the commonly seen trees grown on their own even on building top and flooring- cracks..inspiring very much
God takes advantage of man's negligence to establish Himself very well! Nice poem!
In the seed itself everything is pre-written. Which tree it belongs to? How long it will survive? What kind of fruit will it give? Every miniute the sprouted seed grows into a big plant and then into a giant tree. By then the shapeof the seed is no more, but in its place a giant tree comes up. The tree gives hundreds of fruits containing hundreds of seeds. So one seed gives thousands of seeds during the lifetime of the tree. This is the cycle of life, that is portrayed well in the poem.
a seed which brought out a life too..a green sprout man's imperfection helps god's impregnation ---- meaningful poem. well structured and nice echoing sense...10
'a seed which brought out a life too..a green sprout' Nice poem, luminous.
let life peeps out every minute...... let our scientist find out a test tube baby.....
Another meaningful and lovely write, Sam. I love it! : -)