Wednesday, June 24, 2009

## A Life Peeps Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a perfectly cemented floor
a crack on it said a lot more
who ever tapped on its door
for a sprout of grass to peep out door
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009

Another meaningful and lovely write, Sam. I love it! : -)

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Sandhya S N 03 July 2009

Powerful words on the power of nature regards Sandhya

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 June 2009

Nice prolific thought to ponder on.

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Raj Arumugam 29 June 2009

Lovely piece about the power of nature...

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i enjoyed the for you used. and of course the wording is super.

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Pandian Angelina 27 June 2009

God uses imperfect men To make fruitful lives Poet friend You remind me of Water turning to Wine From the Ordinary Something Extraordinary Will happen if onyl We let God into our life, As my father usually says! A wonderful and wise poem To be read in the silence Of each ones heart! Angel

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Indira Renganathan 27 June 2009

May be a pipal or banyan...as Mr.Rajaram has put it..'one seed gives thousands of seeds '...pipal and banyan are the commonly seen trees grown on their own even on building top and flooring- cracks..inspiring very much

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Ramesh T A 27 June 2009

God takes advantage of man's negligence to establish Himself very well! Nice poem!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 26 June 2009

In the seed itself everything is pre-written. Which tree it belongs to? How long it will survive? What kind of fruit will it give? Every miniute the sprouted seed grows into a big plant and then into a giant tree. By then the shapeof the seed is no more, but in its place a giant tree comes up. The tree gives hundreds of fruits containing hundreds of seeds. So one seed gives thousands of seeds during the lifetime of the tree. This is the cycle of life, that is portrayed well in the poem.

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Meggie Gultiano 26 June 2009

a nice message..as in all of your writes, Sam..Wonderfful

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Joseph Poewhit 26 June 2009

True about them cracks

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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

a seed which brought out a life too..a green sprout man's imperfection helps god's impregnation ---- meaningful poem. well structured and nice echoing sense...10

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Lady Grace 25 June 2009

that's it//perfectly written..

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Subbaraman N V 25 June 2009

Yes; truly depicted! Well crafted!

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Sandra Martyres 24 June 2009

A very original depiction of life - well scripted.10

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Louis Rams 24 June 2009

an excellent write and it tells it all. a ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

'a seed which brought out a life too..a green sprout' Nice poem, luminous.

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rago rago 24 June 2009

let life peeps out every minute...... let our scientist find out a test tube baby.....

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Carol Gall 24 June 2009

verey effective life in a different form 10

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