Thursday, September 17, 2009

A Life Invisible Comments

Rating: 5.0

smell of futile sweat
surges of androgenic blood
blossomed lily sweating more
anorgasmic frustration
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Roseann Shawiak 18 February 2014

A deep scar always hidden within the woman, never forgetting in thought what she has made invisible. Really potent thoughts, about a sad situation in our society. Absolutely intense poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Rachel Butler 17 September 2009

I was sent to purify you but you got rid of me as I was filth you never held me in your arms neither did I suckled upon your breast Rachel Ann Butler

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C. P. Sharma 17 September 2009

Poetry and pathos at theIr climax and shaMe on THE society for female feticide. CP

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Indira Babbellapati 17 September 2009

what do i write on this sad-realistic- reflection of a woman's life within the barbed fence of survival!

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Lady Grace 17 September 2009

well, the last line enjoys u most...nice dialogue..

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