Monday, May 4, 2009

A Life In Nothing Comments

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Do you know how painful it is to get dressed up for you?
Do you know how sad it is,
A lonely girl with no one in the audience for her?
Poems, stories, all with the central theme of your abandonment.
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Melissa Nikolova
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Angel Uchiyama 07 May 2009

hey Melissa! I really liked this poem. my guess it's a grown girl, telling her father that she as changed and he didn't even noticed. i'ts sad, but with lot of anger. And I love they way you finished, with a directly question, to the character who caused the reason of the poem.

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