Tuesday, June 25, 2013

A Life In A Room Comments

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Tattered Box and Yellow Card
And fading faces of people past
Dark torn words of brittle verb
And broken Hearts and weary word
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David Burton Richardson
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Olugbenga Ayoola 13 September 2013

life is a room touch my soul very well, ur repitation is very good, but d comma and full stop make it difficult to understand my brother ok, pls read my poem and make coment ok, world is war, our freedom come, wise house e.t.c

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