Sunday, December 27, 2015

A Life For A Life Comments

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I have all here with me
I have them all within me
I have kept them save
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Emmanuel Chibuike Ikechukwu
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Emmanuel Chibuike 27 December 2015

thanks you

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Anzelyne Shideshe 27 December 2015

The first stanza, the last line i think it should read i have kept them safe......... keep on writing and be keen with TYPOS.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 27 December 2015

The first stanza i think it should be i have kept them safe...........' otherwise keep on writing.

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