Wednesday, January 4, 2006

A Life Comments

Rating: 3.3

a life is, , ,
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hazem al jaber
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Tristan Love-day 07 February 2014

its short but explains a persons life, i like it, keep up thr gr8 work

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Rafique Farooqi 23 August 2009

in few line you have written everything we face in our life....wonderful

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Obed Souza 18 July 2009

Lovely poem! This mystery of being alive... Would you please read ' Inspiration'?

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''a life is, , , a smile.... a tears.... and a memories....'' good writing..10++

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tara star 25 April 2009

very good, , , u've described LIFE in only 4 lines....so simply....other take lives to describe life.... keep tht way always.

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sumaira .....ir 07 January 2009

What a lovely poem! Lovelyyy!

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 11 October 2008

a beautiful way to describe life....love it...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

Small and beautiful observation with life. I added 10 to it.

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Meggie Gultiano 28 May 2007

I love this. Simple and cute

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Marvin Brato 03 May 2007

Good poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Krantz 09 February 2007

memories are all we have left....make good memories! ! without tears! ! !

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June30 Tara 27 December 2006

short, simple & sweet rgds, Tara

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Samantha lynn 13 December 2006

Cool poem, it very cute! and so true. ♥ Samantha

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Onida 12 November 2006

a gr8 poem.Simply good. Yours, Nida Fathima

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Emily Brown 17 September 2006

This is great I love how you described life like that. really good -cheers

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Kathryn Miller 06 June 2006

Wonderful poem. It is short but it gets the point accross. We must all hope, though, that the memories we have are happy. -Kathryn

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Nibedita Deb 13 January 2006

And so it is. In fact smiles and tears live through memories - and memories are greatest treasures. Nicely put. Regards, Nibedita.

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