Light!
You flash through the darkness
The black shadows rush at me
I fight and spark
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O opurba hoyeche! Nicely composed in a beautiful form. Valobasha shoho my 10 with it.
Your poem is really cool. I like the contradiction from light to dark. A great flow, just an enjoyable read.
Darkness is the womb of light. When you are in darkness the light of your soul blinks. You really feel that you are within you.Thanks tapas for sharing it.
shades of life, light you flash thru darkness and darkness you flash thru light, impressive Tapas,10
Darkness in life can lead towards lots as it depends on an individual how they interpret it. Ones with positive thoughts would try and convert darkness into ray of hope which will hold plenty dreams. This poem is nice liked reading it.
light and darkness...contradicting experiences of mind...good imagery here...and the mind ultimately inclining to realise the better course to pursue in life...a good write, Tapas…good style too… my ten for this...
You are genius in thought, no doubt. May I know more about you?
A nice write. hope you will compose more and share with us.
easy-flowing, smooth writing.... Loved the poem.