** A Life ** Comments

Now absolute diabolical insolence, you are......preternaturally good.

Well, the title caught my attention and the poem is simply beautiful. Well done

life is one, pleasures are many, including the ones mentioned here..........read my poem called MAGNETS

Life is self-breeding! It has always umpredictable ways to show us the wonders of love. Lovely poem!

very nyc poem! ! keep it up! !

no words needed to describe this 1..10s again for #6....see i told you i will pay you back for the favor which is no favor at all..need the comment n the votes..im lacking

'We cannot erase The pleasure A life' Marvelous short poem on life. Last lines are amazing.

we can't erase the pleasure in life..nice expression..congrats for this top marks..grace

'...'We cannot erase, The pleasure, A life..' So true. Including the pain too. Cheers. Subroto

This very excellent Mr. Yusof descibinh about life. Great job.

Wow, I never knew that the act could be explained so well. Thankyou

this is AMAZING! ! ! ! u left me speechless....... very great write

That apple tree would have said the same words to 'ADAAM'

Dear Master of the human body, mind and emotional system, and Master of the intricate workings of the passionate procreative forces and human connective explosions, you've done it again. This time with fewer words but with what seemed like a magnitude of sensuously subtle metaphors which taunted the brain and stimulated the 'electrical' system. Hmmmmmm, you are so clever and styled what could have been a raunchy punch into a work of art. You, the Master, poet supreme, tickeled us with class. Thank you! Carol

A few moments of pleasure resulting in life, very good.

Oh ya! Where is my woman! ! Brilliant wording! ! ! Very nice

I like it. It gives me a nice fuzzy feeling of hope and yet i don't know why. Awesome poem.

I like the words, adorable of pinky madness. keep writing!

So seductive and sensuous! TOO HOT!

this is awesome, man is lovely with poetry and existence.