Saturday, July 5, 2014

A Lie Is Really Beautiful Comments

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If someone says I love you my dear,
Come on my love too close and near.

I shall bring stars from the distant sky,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Indira Renganathan 05 February 2018

To think this way is possible to Akhtarji only....as always highly interesting....this is truth and not a lie

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Tajudeen Shah 19 October 2014

yes, yeh lurka hai Allah, kitna hai deewana, kitna mushkil hai tawbah enko samjhna.. (mot sumjhaana) and the furnace like sighs (as in As you like it) are felt while reading the passionate expressions, adoration of beauty, love and feelings that one cherishes, dreams, keeps within, and still finds intact, despite the desolate ages that have past over the complex life. wonderful. what attracted me much is the depiction, not just the twist or theme. God bless. keep penning still exploring the passionate profoundness of human imaginations, experiences and dreams. God bless.

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 August 2014

A beautiful poem it touches the heart.

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Sarmad Mirza 09 July 2014

really nice hats off to the poet

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Valsa George 07 July 2014

Yes, we all love to listen to lies about our accomplishments.... but you lovely guy, you are becoming more and more naughty these days! !

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Kirti Sharma 07 July 2014

:) lovely! ! i really like the rhymes! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 July 2014

Lovely love poem. But the answer lies within you poem.... You know it well that, in toto, it's a lie, You smile and say how lovely is this guy! ... It was really a fantastic poem, rhymes very well. I loved reading it.

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V P Mahur 06 July 2014

Dear Bro, Very beautifully expressed. The end of the poem is really nice. Thanks for your comments.

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