Saturday, October 19, 2013

A Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't lie and say you love me,
I know you don't at all.
This mission that you are on,
will drive me up the wall.
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Lilyann Monahan
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Adeline Foster 01 February 2014

Wish the comment below were mine because it sums it up exactly. Well done. Read mine - Despair - Adeline

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Wahab Abdul 04 November 2013

this is a fine piece..well flowed...enjoyed reading..

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Nivedita Patnaik 23 October 2013

The last 4 lines says it all....the choice of language is aptly used...loved it.

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