Friday, August 3, 2012

A Lie Comments

Rating: 4.9

My father approached me by surprise
And telling me, he wants to go to a Casino.
However, he'd like me to tell a lie.
I said to my father,
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Alon Calinao Dy
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Karamveer singh 28 July 2021

Very nice poms

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Shania K. Younce 06 November 2012

I believe what you say is most sincer. I find that deception seems to find ways to creep in many places. However, I do think you could find a way to forgive.

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Gjc Brisso 11 September 2012

WOW VERY DEEP SO MUCH FEELING THAT CAME FROM YOUR HEART

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 11 September 2012

whatever way they call it, a lie is still a lie and no one can change it. lies, similar to betrayal this poem should be read by all.

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Francisca Darko 01 September 2012

Honest words. your poems are very true

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Adeline Foster 22 August 2012

Ah, you expose the nature of humans. Read mine - Lies - enjoy. Adeline

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Douglas Scotney 20 August 2012

Maybe they do it 'cause they know you'll one day want them to lie for you too. They are like conmen. They'll have evidence to bribe you with. You've got to keep up your standards so you'll never need that to happen. Ironically, the liars won't be able to trust you. PS. my poem Hardenedarsiscism has been condensed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2012

Hey, you can't lie to me.' , , , , lovely lines. good to read and enjoy....10 you know by instinct what can be the fact but it is common to lie worst method to try... enjoy

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Eindaray Kyaw 19 August 2012

Hello! Thank you because you wrote this poem, A Lie.Not it only reveals the nature of the people, but it also reminds all of us that telling a lie, even the kind that we often call ''White Lie'', cannot be hidden, am I right? So, I like it.

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Joe Obama 03 August 2012

It is beautiful... Well-done Mr. Alon Calinao Dy!

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Michelle Tailor 03 August 2012

I can't that it is not beautiful... I hate myself lying all the time. What a beautiful poem, very simple! So Don't tell a lie. I love your poems!

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