most woman to day are highly liberated lot,
they no longer care to, wake up early and
greet their hubbies with a cup of coffee, but
expect hubbies to take lead in coffee et all.
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Nice work with the muse of things seen around us today. Yes! The dressing code.
Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. I concur with the poet's perspective on the desirability of the traditional role of woman against the so called role of liberated women. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Your very explosive poem is an eyeopener to such 'liberated' women who can guess the consequences of their actions..............thanks for sharing, mandara
a rhetorical question for the title. A very nice work on the essay of the modern woman.thanks for sharing.
waaw.... you have created a masterpiece sir... and have covered almost all the dimensions.. 10++++++++++ Regards: prashant
its great you have left no stone unturned, dealt intelligently with the whole issue
I don't really agree to yr lines.. u can't just justify the liberation mostly in the way woman dress nowadays. Yes, some of women had unwritten agendas on their exposed body (through they minimalist-clothes) . But I also see many women try to catch the family & career both in her full devotion (with fully clothes) . And for me, to find the kid still linger in my side after crazy-work-hours is a special gift of God. Sorry that u didn't share the comfort idea of jeans (i even wear it at work) . Anyway... i like this great poem. i appreciate your view, tks for share.
This is a lovely poem and it is true. There is a few good things about a free woman though. A guy can show his passion to a girl easier without the family be wooed. The girl can hangout with the guy more cause the guy does some work. When they both share work they grab a hold of a close bond.
I READ THIS SWEET BEAUTIFUL POEM BEFORE, ENJOYED IT ONCE AGAIN
Longish and oldies Sermon like who’ll listen? Nudity is innate and sexuality is concocted. Nicely addressed but afraid if XX gen reacts over? Or over reacts? ? Ten Ms NB UK
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm? dont know what to say? ! ! what to write! NO COMMENT! ! !
you confuse liberation with being fashion obsessed...or maybe you re saying the women of today consider being foolishly fashionable as liberation. Me, i really love the sari and wait for the day when i ll grow up so i can wear it, u see im just 15 :) nice poem it kinda engrossed me, i like the way u give it a funny touch.
There are some important things that you say in this poem but unfortunately they get lost in the mellow tirade against modernism and modern-day women. You are trying to uphold traditional customs and values but then you have to look it at without any bias... better right an essay on this topic than this..
Hi, this is a poem supposed to be read by the women of today or the young females now, but to women my age, it is useless, for we know the trend now. Thanks for your insight which is very useful to women of today! Let them visualize the ugly side of their being too liberal I rate you 8.!
Nice on poetic description, yet we shall not judge any one, every body who does any thing have some context to it