A Letter To The Unborn Child Comments

You have warned the unborn baby about how hard life can be but there are good aspects of life as well. That's why you could inspire him too. Anyway I like it. Keep on writing

Honest and a bit brutal. I like the honesty, I like the bit of brutality in the poem Life can be harsh, life can be hard Our bodies can hurt thornfully Our hearts can hurt sorrowfully Our minds can hurt seemingly endlessly but our soul is soothing always If we manage to find our soul deep inside If we manage to find that little light inside That little light that can connect and unite We may mange to rise above our troubles and live a llife with purpose sometimes a small smile and small good deed is a great beginning. Good Poem, Ernest