Thursday, March 28, 2019

A Letter To The Moon Comments

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I was with the moon last night,
I'm with him again tonight;
With all the glittering dots beside;
Lavishing me with delight;
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Ailbhe Eighteen
May
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bri edwards 13 April 2019

U use " nigh" for " near" i believe. not sure it 'fits' (for me) , but a nice rhyme and i guess you are not physically near the moon but still a good dancing partner i'll bet. rivet: " hold (someone or something) fast so as to make them incapable of movement." OK i think having a love affair with the moon is lunacy! ! ! ! ! to MyPoemList and i think into my May showcase of PH poems, which i'm starting to prepare. Thanks. bri :)

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