Keeping you for so long in my body
Feeling you taking a complete form of body
You were the best smile to wear
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A strongly emotional poem on the unconditional love of a mother. Very well crafted it has smooth flow. Thanks for sharing.10++++
Its only the mother's love which can never be paid off from the world's zillions of money. She is an idol of love. Thank you sir for your appreciation
Hi Ritika, The unconditional love of a mother is expressed in a quite emotionally saturated manner.
thank you so much sir for appreciating me. I invite you to read my other poems too
When clouds pour heavily and sun shines bright I run places finding shelter to hide My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long Soon I will be singing my death song As I go on my last road I leave my blessings to you and love load. these last lines touched me very very much. your love and your struggle, you pain and your tears and now bidding farewell getting ready for the last journey....... such a wonderful poem. i am taken up by your writing. tony
Its a great compliment for me sir. Thank you so much sir for reading my poems always with great enthusiasm
A mother's love never changes, but a sons love can dwindle as time goes by, but one day the son will return. A great poem.
Thank you so much sir. i am glad that the feelings are conveyed to you in the correct manner.
Awesome dear every single word is telling a known pain which every mother hides for her child👌
i am glad that my words conveyed the correct feeling to you. Thanx
Touched by the feel of the poem....deeply thought and penned down. Keep it up...😊
My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long Soon I will be singing my death song As I go on my last road I leave my blessings to you and love load.. ... very fine poem.