Monday, November 12, 2018

A Letter To Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keeping you for so long in my body
Feeling you taking a complete form of body

You were the best smile to wear
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Ritika Deborah George
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Prabir Gayen 23 May 2019

My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long Soon I will be singing my death song As I go on my last road I leave my blessings to you and love load.. ... very fine poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 November 2018

A strongly emotional poem on the unconditional love of a mother. Very well crafted it has smooth flow. Thanks for sharing.10++++

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Ritika George 19 November 2018

Its only the mother's love which can never be paid off from the world's zillions of money. She is an idol of love. Thank you sir for your appreciation

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

Hi Ritika, The unconditional love of a mother is expressed in a quite emotionally saturated manner.

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Ritika George 16 November 2018

thank you so much sir for appreciating me. I invite you to read my other poems too

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vicky 15 November 2018

Beautiful poem. keep it up, best of luck.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 November 2018

When clouds pour heavily and sun shines bright I run places finding shelter to hide My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long Soon I will be singing my death song As I go on my last road I leave my blessings to you and love load. these last lines touched me very very much. your love and your struggle, you pain and your tears and now bidding farewell getting ready for the last journey....... such a wonderful poem. i am taken up by your writing. tony

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Ritika George 15 November 2018

Its a great compliment for me sir. Thank you so much sir for reading my poems always with great enthusiasm

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Dave Walker 13 November 2018

A mother's love never changes, but a sons love can dwindle as time goes by, but one day the son will return. A great poem.

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Ritika George 15 November 2018

Thank you so much sir. i am glad that the feelings are conveyed to you in the correct manner.

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Maya George 13 November 2018

Beautiful poem. Keep it up.

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Maya George 13 November 2018

Beautiful poem. Keep it up

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Saman 12 November 2018

Beautiful

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Saman 12 November 2018

Beautiful

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Shobhana 12 November 2018

Very heart touching..

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Rekha 12 November 2018

Awesome dear every single word is telling a known pain which every mother hides for her child👌

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Ritika George 13 November 2018

i am glad that my words conveyed the correct feeling to you. Thanx

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Padmaja 12 November 2018

Touched by the feel of the poem....deeply thought and penned down. Keep it up...😊

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Ritika George 13 November 2018

I am so overwhelmed by encouraging words of yours

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Ritika George 13 November 2018

i am so overwhelmed with encouraging words of yours

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Avijit Jaiswal 12 November 2018

Very very heart touching....

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Avijit Jaiswal 12 November 2018

Very heart touching.....

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Joyana 12 November 2018

One of the most heart touching n beautiful creation. Love it

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Ritika George 13 November 2018

thanx Joyana for reading my piece

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Ritika Deborah George

Ritika Deborah George

lucknow, India
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