A letter to say I give up because you put me down.
A letter to say thanks for the pain it just made me sane.
A letter to say forget it even though you never bothered to think about it.
A letter to say you were loved, you will be loved and you're loved just never again by me.
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I like this poem alot, the rhyme scheme, the beat, the messeges are all really good. Great job! : D
rhythmic and the feeling of boredom with the persistent comments of other narrow minded people really comes through. the rhythm is my favourite though, it gives it a pulse and as a result blood, breath and life come with it. nice. -M
A polite way to say nay! Loved your poem.