Saturday, January 12, 2013

A Letter To Say... Comments

Rating: 3.9

A letter to say I give up because you put me down.
A letter to say thanks for the pain it just made me sane.
A letter to say forget it even though you never bothered to think about it.
A letter to say you were loved, you will be loved and you're loved just never again by me.
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Lucy Grainger
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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2017

A polite way to say nay! Loved your poem.

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Karoliena Somura 28 January 2013

I like this poem alot, the rhyme scheme, the beat, the messeges are all really good. Great job! : D

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Sandy Player 13 January 2013

rhythmic and the feeling of boredom with the persistent comments of other narrow minded people really comes through. the rhythm is my favourite though, it gives it a pulse and as a result blood, breath and life come with it. nice. -M

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