Wednesday, June 1, 2016

A Letter To My Future Self Comments

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Dearest me of 2025, maybe,
Or perhaps I shouldn't have addressed you as 'me'?
We are distant, I know; myself and you,
We are no longer one, but two.
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Haala Marikar
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Chinedu Dike 10 July 2016

Insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Haala.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 June 2016

A brilliant way, as a layperson to view the life. You see the difference between the person just now and the person years later. Lord Buddha saw this difference from one chiththakshana to the next, only some millionth of a moment away. That is why he discoursed that what our eyes catch is only a mirage. Wonderful to note how you take it. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2016

An insightful train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Haala. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Chuy Amante 01 June 2016

Well expressed! secret: Things get better every year! ! ! ! ! !

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