A Letter To My Darling Comments

you use all i know about poetry in this, and it sounds too good very poignant write

I know my darling You are angry with me You must have thought me a coward, a liar and an escapist Yes, you are right I have escaped from you Because, I loved another woman a mother My motherland. Sir......your love for your country is so much evident in your poems.....and the way.......the mood of the poetry changes is fantastic......it starts with a plea to your beloved and suddenly it changes to the love for motherland......Brilliant.

‘I loved another woman a mother My motherland….’ 180 degree shift! Total poetic anticlimax! With a but… its love for country to sever love of fiancée is great Ten+ ++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv PS You’re winner and your fiancée will love you more for your idealism.

beautifully sad.......

My sin is I loved my country Rachel Ann Butler

a nice one even though this is a monologue-a narration not a poetry

This is very stirring, yes emotional and what a choice to make, love or country! ! Excellent poem! Phebe

hey? i think that your poem is really cool and i may urge you to continue writing as many as you possibly can coz i love your poems.bye.

I got ur emotion, level of feelings.