A Letter To Him.... Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful love poem written from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Mallika.

I was away from home from many years. My wife used to write me letter every week. The feeling I got from your poem is the same as I experienced many years ago... from every letter, every week.

Passionately penned feelings of love for the loved one and impatience of waiting for him is gem packed in this love letter. It reminds me of an old Hindi film song, likhe jo khat tujhe..... It is superb.

Your poem is intense with love and longings for your one and only who is your very heartbeat. A superb and beautiful love letter to your loved one. It is stirring, words capsule your deep love. Enjoyed reading. Thank you.

An impassioned treaty for the loved one to return, every twist and pain artfully written.. Quite a plea, imploring write.. The loved one will come hurrying back to you.. Thank you for sharing.

This poem truly expresses the distress and emotions that come from missing a lover who is gone. The effects on the body and the inability to get on with life in a normal fashion are eloquently portrayed and the fact that words are insufficient and not enough to really express what is felt is noted as you say, sheets of papers seemed insufficient, alas, such is always the case. Well written, thank you for sharing.

Sheets of papers seemed insufficient, alas To scribble them all - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Drop by drop dripping droplets from eyes And my sorrowful sighs- - - - - - - - - - - Papers are not enough and words can not convey the the deep feelings of love heart pines for in separation.Wonderful write dear Mallika.

Great! you were very happy! ! ! Where your voice and my laughter are entwining in our ever lasting merriment and never ending chit chat.

To scribble them all sheets of papers are insufficient to express words of emotion. As such these days soft papers are available on computer screens where we express letters more. Waiting for ultimately pen waits for love. Very fantastic poem shared....10

''Our days get filled with little things like jolly jokes, many petty quarrels Hugs and kisses here and there...'' two souls who love each other.. their love enriches their life together.. and the the longing of the lonely soul, when the other is away.. all above, very well expressed Thanks, dear Mallika