Saturday, May 5, 2018

A Letter To Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear Death.
Do you remember the last time we met at the beach?
When you played beach ball with your scythe.
When we sat together enjoying the warmth of the sunshine.
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Anu Soneye
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Otitonijesu David 23 July 2022

When i saw 'Death', I thought this will be horror. So I was about to swipe, then i read the second line and this one gripped me till the last line. I like that i had a mix of emotions in the end...I started seeing death as the friend it hurts to lose.

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2018

I can't walk under a bleeding moon without getting my hands wet. under the blazing rays of a raged sun. powerful expressions to talk to death great imagination.. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 June 2018

That a onetime lemonade-mouth now has his lips covered in blood. blood, raged sun .. imagination..... that death was once human............wonderful poem dear friend.. tony

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Naila Rais 08 May 2018

A great write... Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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Aminat Opatola 06 May 2018

Dear Anu, a lovely prose poem this is, nice work with a great thinking...10++++ hoping to read more from you. Thanks aminat.

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