Dear black Santa Claus I have some wish
it is not as many as the hair on
your head as a matter of fact the wish
is about hair, you see my friend Malik has turn
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i love this poem it is very easy to read and understand and has humor/humour; i love humor also! ! i guess i've always had a " black Santa Claus" .....[note, i capitalize Claus; i don't know why you do not, ..and once you do not capitalize " santa" ].........as MY Santa always had a white beard. maybe he was just THAT old. i hope your friend got his (black, blue, green?) beard, NOT white! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)
A much better poem than the first draft great write full of humour Well done