Sunday, April 13, 2008

A Letter To An Unborn Child Comments

Rating: 4.0

You've got your fingers toes and ears
A little being, oblivious of fears
Lungs developed spine has grown
3 months to go before you're on your own
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Delwen Doyle
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Solomon Kobela 09 October 2012

a good piece indeed. good choice of words...my kinda thing....

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Chitra - 03 September 2008

well written, a good theme here

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Michael Manners 06 May 2008

wow, I don't know what 2 say, I love this Poem, it's really different, ...... Great Write!

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Ivan Donn Carswell 13 April 2008

A sadly comic but unfortunately all too true scenario! Well written. Rgds, Ivan

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