A Letter To A Man Comments

this makes me cry, carry on writing

an unsung hero who stands up for you and yet he is a stranger you have not met. for the first time you feel special only to have him continue on with his day unaware. nicely written

Dear friend it such a wonderful to hear u have a nice memories that will eternally to be remembered as u wrote this...but later it become darker and full of emotion there..so nicely expressed... But it is okay, as u told that like a 'rose wilting and dying' just let it go because one day the rose tree will produce more beautiful roses and attractive...when? just wait but must to remember that to have all the future roses buds to bloom again its need strong and healthy plant..so be strong n u will have ur beautiful future 'roses'..a dozen with nice smell..Good luck

As elephant tramples creeper you trampled my heart and gave me jitters...........good poem expressing the emotions from depth of heart.........

Wonderfully put emotion and depth! I relate far to much to poems like this lol Sorrowful and beauty in written word, thanks for sharing Jameaka! Keep it up :)

very good, very deep, very sad, keep on writng

hey real deep stuff. cool how you talked about it

all times loves will win but it will hurts you so and if you are not strong enough, you will stumble in your life due to broken love not broken heart. very good work of words and i appreciate your self-realization at your age. Read mine Love Kills and you shall understand how love can make you be your own enemy. anyway, good poem.

The love game hurts--at times

I have nothing to say really. I mean, it was so emotional and it's tough to describe what it makes you feel. I was really good though. It seemed so realistic and then, it's like it all just faded away so quickly as you realized what you felt was one sided.....

VERY emotional! You really know how express yourself....i agree the last two lines were great!

The last two lines is a crusher if you know what I mean... Great job! :)

a heart-wrenching poem. well-written with the feelings of anguish nicely drawn out. well done. and i'm sorry for the pain you went through.: ( but then again, a chinese poet once said that we do not write good poems when we are happy. we simply want to enjoy life when it is good. so it is only in the presence of pain do humans create some amazing art pieces. which is what this is. :)

this is a well said, heartfelt poem. i really enjoy reading it. everything can be mended thru time. even the worst heartbreaks. i particularly love the first two lines. very deep. a great way of expressing yerself.

....so feels my heart! A poem from deep within your spirit. Pray that you be made whole again! Well penned, heartfelt, ; D

hmmmmmmmmm......that person trampled the most fragile thing of body....hearttttttttt............fine emotions expressed by poignant verses.....10+++...