Saturday, December 12, 2009

A Letter Of Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I glance at you I already knew
i am destined for you and you are
for me too.
A hundred times beyond normal
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lean punio
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Sara Tehrani 17 April 2010

beautiful opening to the poem :) i felt the passion and the sadness. very expressive and emotional. only thing is i think towards the end it began to lose the poetry flow that u had at the beginning. Im off to read your other poems now :)

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V F 13 December 2009

Wish u all d best! ! ! hope for the best! ! 1

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Dinesh Mukherji 12 December 2009

your leter(letter) may be of good bye with warm welcome, indeed it is waht love. From the heart and soul.

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