Thursday, October 25, 2012

A Letter In The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.7

Yellow foliage fallen on my hands
Remind me, they once were green
Reminisce me of our beautiful time
Standing here, witnessing running days
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Unwritten Soul
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Denis Mair 11 January 2020

Entrusting the wind to carry thoughts across a gulf takes a leap of faith, which is essential for writing poetry. From this poem I see that your " muscle" of faith is well-exercised and able to make that leap. When one is inspired, even the sky's wide-open emptiness becomes a dimension wherein the breadth and depth of feelings are measured.

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Mj Lemon 10 May 2019

This one goes to myfavourites, Soul. There is a brilliant melancholy here...a sense we all desire permanence, but there are times we ought to remind ourselves that those things which we believe eternal may be so, but appear and travel like the wind.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

Part - 2 Between us, joining two souls, you and me The only junction connecting us over the sea Maybe i am the only one who counting Upon the days till you are here to return..... Thanks for sharing.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

Part - 1 The green leaves become yellow and fall once from trees.Time does pass but memories come to mind of bright past. Time cant't fade the golden past. The beginning of the poem is so fantastic. Dear soul, you have so touchingly and astutely inscribed on nature and relationship. I cite.... Far by the oceans, across the lands Two minds bind to different poles of hearts

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Walterrean Salley 01 March 2018

Speaks of abundant hope for all. Never give up. And wonderful for its great encouragement shared. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2017

Sorry, please read ' marvellous' instead of 'marvdlous'. It has been inadvertently done.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 August 2017

So beautiful and imagery. Heart touching depiction. Stunning expression. Above all a marvdlous poem.

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Simone Inez Harriman 07 August 2017

WOW.....I am so knocked-out stunned at this beautifully penned poem. I shed tears reading this true masterpiece as your poem resonates with the sadness in my soul......I have known well the heartache from that distance and separation from the ones you love. Straight to my favorites.

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Unwritten Soul 07 August 2017

What should i say, and what i say here maybe less than what is the thing i really want to say to you...Thank you, although i know i have limited way of writing and expressing, but to know someone feel and appreciate my feeling and how i converted it in poetry..it just makes me feel stronger and feel worth it to express..i feel free...and you kindness gave all to this feeling, thanks Simone...Always make me feel fine, you deserve the best my dear friend

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Hazel Durham 26 June 2017

Such intense beauty of your words spilling with emotions onto the page with incredible imagery and a superb write! !

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 June 2017

A heart-touching, well written poem...I love the flow of emotions and words...Thank you for sharing, Soul...❤

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Unwritten Soul 04 June 2017

Again and again thanks to you :) You are one of soothing word in the wind..telling smile to wherever you lay on surface/people :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

Reminiscence! Watching and waiting; with the muse of the melodies of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 October 2016

Very Heartfelt! ! ! Touching Poem! Beautifully done! Grateful You shared!

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Muhammad Ali 17 August 2016

A letter... in the wind. A twinkle, in the globe... the globe of tear! A praying honest heart. Beauty of true relationship is all this poem.

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Tom Billsborough 09 May 2016

Yes, another very moving poem with an unerring sense of rhythm. It contains many beautiful thoughts expressed with great artistry. Glad I found you! Tom Billsborough Ps No you found me first! A big bonus for me.

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Heather Wilkins 11 August 2013

this is a beautiful write. the last stanza a delight to write. enjoyed the write

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Ken E Hall 03 July 2013

Luvli poem indeed 'from me till end of my time, luvli all the way thru will read many times...excuse the luvli spelling its Yorkshire slang! which is said with deep meaning. regards

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Frank James Davis 05 April 2013

You have a unique, extremely pleasing style. Wonderful, Soul!

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Vivek Tiwari 08 January 2013

A rare but excellent piece. Goodly expressed.

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Colin Bradley 01 January 2013

beautifully written excellent

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Jahan Zeb 14 December 2012

Looking the same sun, hope it warming you Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night. This is undoubtedly a spectacular write and I enjoyed it very very much. I liked the thought in every part of this artistic piece. The best thing I saw and read in this piece is the wonderful imagination in it. the idea of getting sunlight from the sun looking at the moon for it is sheltering your friend. But you know I got relief to see that you do have a friend. Marvelous. Unwritten Soul

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