Thursday, October 22, 2009

A Letter He'll Never Read Comments

Rating: 4.8

There are so many things I still want to say
So many tears that just won't go away
But will he ever know what's written in my heart?
Maybe not, but this is a great place to start.
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Victoria Ayres
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Me Myself And I... 17 July 2010

I knew i would like it, just after reading the 1st 2 lines! ! Love this lots such a well thought out and put together poem, plz plz keep writing (slowly getting through your work) lol

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Amrit Rathi 06 May 2010

A great poem with sentiments simmering all around! It has style, flow and feelings right from the heart. Keep writing.

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The Bobster 09 November 2009

Lovely poem on a sad theme. As a compassionate sort of guy, it tugs at my heart strings a bit as I recognise the type of ba****d who has used the poor girl and then dumped her for pastures new. An all too common story. the irregular rhythm of the poem underlines the feelings of the girl almost sobbing as she tells her story. I think this poem is altogether well written even if some of the rhymes are just a little forced. Nice one. I will read more of your work. thanks for the invite!

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Tiziana Blacklock 08 November 2009

I liked your poem very much. It's a poem that most of us can relate to and feel. A real love letter of a broken heart but very well said and nice ending too.

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Serenity Prayer 22 October 2009

awesome poem! i love the format, how it rhymed. very sad, yet totally awesome. keep up the good work.

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Victoria Ayres

Victoria Ayres

Norfolk VA
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