Saturday, November 21, 2015

A Letter From The Unborn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear...
(I still don’t know if I may use this word 'dear'? !
As I’m no more dear to you
Nor will I ever be,
...
Read full text

bakuli bhakali
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 21 November 2015

Fantastic. The emotional appeal (right from the word 'dear') from an unborn child to his father and mother who conceived him. The words draw our attention about social evils prevailing all around. Thanks. I would like to quote from his address to his mother: There is least you can do, To save me! It’s just; you’re lamb with the limbs

1 0 Reply
Bakuli Bhakali 21 November 2015

thank you rajnish ji! actual it was she i was talking about. anyways, thank you again!

0 0
Ratnakar Mandlik 21 November 2015

A n excellent flight of imagery displayed in the form of a letter from an unborn child professing a bright and meaningful tomorrow with girl child after it's birth. Reiteration of birth of girl child is commendable. Enjoyed the thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

1 0 Reply
Bakuli Bhakali 21 November 2015

thank you for your valuable comment!

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Unborn child sends amazing letter to give shining of light. A thought provoking poem and heart touching...10

1 0 Reply
Bakuli Bhakali 21 November 2015

I’m glad it touched your heart! Thank you for the letters you dropped! They’re very inspiring!

0 0
Close
Error Success