Sunday, October 18, 2009

A Letter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Filled with emotions my heart inks pages full of devotion.
The words on the pages screaming for your attention
In hopes you’ll notice
I long to see your smiling face, lacey brown hair
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Alex Segree
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2009

The look in your eyes on those faithful nights Embraces ever so tight trying to preserve the moment in time Our moment in time Rain drops from cloudy skies describe the way I feel inside.........................emotional and touchy words from heart.... really beautiful poem.. i loved it all....10 read mine.............brown eyes...two bright eyes.. mary to marry

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Alex Segree

Alex Segree

Springfield, MA
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