Friday, March 21, 2014

A Lesson Of Smile Comments

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My child!
do you know
how to smile?
if you learn to smile
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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2014

A nice message a father can give to his child.

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Ramesh Rai 27 March 2014

Martelle Mcpartland Hi Ramesh, would you consider calling the poem, A Smile? I would break the poem up into stanzas, there is a natural break after, how to smile, so I would have those first three lines as a stanza. Next stanza, next four lines. Last stanza, ..just like a flower that does not know how to weep. I would omit the last four lines as that is a repeat of the lesson.

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Ramesh Rai 27 March 2014

Martelle Mcpartland Hi Ramesh, would you consider calling the poem, A Smile? I would break the poem up into stanzas, there is a natural break after, how to smile, so I would have those first three lines as a stanza. Next stanza, next four lines. Last stanza, ..just like a flower that does not know how to weep. I would omit the last four lines as that is a repeat of the lesson.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 March 2014

The power of smile is so profound. Nicely said in the poem. Thank you.

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