Saturday, July 15, 2017

A Lesson Of Life By A Rose Comments

Rating: 4.8

The dark clouds have hidden the sun,
the breeze turns to an impending storm,
Birds fly home as to them the day is done.
the dark sky opens up, it pours and pours.
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 September 2017

Write comment. Imagination, Renu. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2017

In spite of storm and rivulet the rose lifted its head from leaves and thorns and beautified the nature. It said.. .. let it be auoted... Firstly, I live for myself then to give beauty to everyone's eyes. Finally before I die I provide fragrance to all and sundry. We get a lesson from rose. It is a highly imaginative poem based on philosophy having thrilling expression with nice collocation. Thank u dear madam, you have got full vote.

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Renu Kakkar

Renu Kakkar

Fazilka, punjab
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