In my house, I can see,
Pictures of my sister and me.
I walk into my hall, and I can see,
The kitchen were we should have tea.
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keep on writing, write every day don't think twice about what folks say if you've got poetry going round in your head best get it out before you heart's dead, write about anything write about Liverpool it won't even matter if they think you're a fool study the poets the silly and the wise and let the light shine through a young pair of eyes.........John
You have got it, you have got it, discription and rythem.