Monday, April 13, 2009

A Lesson In Living Comments

Rating: 5.0

(with thanks to Mifael)

The light said STOP
But I did NOT
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Sonya Florentino
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Alison Cassidy 20 April 2009

With a sparsity of words you offer the reader a lesson on the importance of attentiveness. I like your work. It is uncluttered and quirky and you get your point across strongly. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 April 2009

The light said STOP But I did NOT..........When inner light warns us to stop, we must stop other wise we would be crushed by the truck of ill fate............Good Write.......

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

the flow is very well done and the words finely versed amazing..great job

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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