Tuesday, October 2, 2012

A Lesson In Life Comments

Rating: 4.6

Close that door!
Quickly;
Close it.
Another,
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Lyn Paul
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Smoky Hoss 07 November 2022

So true! The conundrum of life is, living into each moment. Beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2018

It is a beautiful philosophical poem on life and pain having touching expression and nice collocation. I feel the following lines are much impressive.... A change Take the left hand Take the right hand But will I pick The 'right' hand Each hand is A Lesson in Life Thanks for sharing.10

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Roseann Shawiak 30 August 2013

I wouldn't pick either door - I'd rather find out for myself what is beyond them. Learning lessons, experiencing them as I walk the path least trodden in life. Discovering in my own way and time the essence of my own life. Not wanting to compare it with anyone else's, because we each have gifts and talents that are different.and we grow through them to maturity. Good write though - thought provoking. RoseAnn

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Heather Wilkins 24 July 2013

so many lessons in life Lyn. every door holds a new experience

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Owain Glyn 22 December 2012

now, if I had to make the choice I think I'd just go back to bed!

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Karoliena Somura 01 December 2012

I liked this very much, so wise!

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Hans Vr 07 October 2012

Nice and full of wisdom Superb poem

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Mark Dillon 03 October 2012

Courage and belief in ourselves are the best keys to any doors we encounter, nice write lyn, as usual.

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Heather Wilson 02 October 2012

So many twists and turns in life, but often we are not sure if we are on the right track. a great write.

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Louis Rams 02 October 2012

and each lesson in life is because of the decision you've made. excellent food for thought,

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