A Lesson In Drawing Comments
My son places his paint box in front of me
and asks me to draw a bird for him.
Into the color gray I dip the brush
and draw a square with locks and bars.
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it is a wonderful poem i like it so much the facts, the sadden, and and the touch great go ahead...bravo
Truly magnificent in its entirety! Theme is fully realized and the ending is too, too sweet icing on the cake baked for you, not by you...may your pen shine on! Give us more poetry...one is not enough! xxxElysabeth
How sad to never know how wonderful peace and the world could be if everyone could chase away sadness and fears.I hope someday my prayers will be answered and your son will see the beauty of a bird in flight or a grain of wheat swaying in the breeze.Great poem, please keep writting and thank you for this touching poem.I gave you a ten
I loved this composition...the facts are so touchy and the way you have related your son is even more compelling...a 10...best wishes Love Gul
it's a sad fact..and how difficult to mention that, as we always ignore it.. this poem makes the heart cries...as it always lies..whenever it would rise.. ....great well-done poem white rose..go on.
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9/7/2025 4:02:36 AM # 1.0.0
it is a very nice poem.