Monday, March 22, 2010

A Lesson In Drawing Comments

Rating: 3.2

My son places his paint box in front of me
and asks me to draw a bird for him.
Into the color gray I dip the brush
and draw a square with locks and bars.
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Nizar Qabbani
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Sona Wilae 20 November 2017

Amazing metaphors to breathe passionately!

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Bharati Nayak 19 November 2017

A Lesson In Drawing by Nizar Qabbani | Delete this message When you grow up, my son, and read the diwan of Arabic poetry you'll discover that the word and the tear are twins and the Arabic poem is no more than a tear wept by writing fingers.' - - - - - -When all the beautiful sentiments are vanishing, when pen is giving way to gun, there is no homeland for writers who really care and weep for the loss of humanity.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Chris Smart 19 November 2017

To draw like this poet is a gift.

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Rae Seagull 19 November 2017

Powerful and sentimental at the same time. Thank you for sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 November 2017

The brush trembles in my hands and I sink, weeping. A very powerful and sensitive poem shared. 10++++ for the sharing. It's a message written with trembling hearts too. It deserves being selected. Thanks and Congrats Nizar for it. Regards. Subhas

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 19 November 2017

Awww this is so sentimental and reflective Great diction! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 November 2017

A wonderful dialogue between the father and son so beautifully portrayed in this poem. So much of learning, philosophy of life! I loved the poem. Heartiest congratulations Nizar. Truly deserving! A full vote

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 November 2017

Such a great write by Nizar Qabbani...,

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Rajnish Manga 19 November 2017

Reflection of a fragmented world. Shameless assault on humanity Succinctly captured in the poem with its painful denouement. Thanks a lot, Dear Poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2017

Armed religion! ! With the muse of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 November 2017

A picture of today's world depicted here truly but with great imagery and emotion.......thanks for sharing

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Kyvin Nash 27 July 2017

I'm out of words, things were beautiful and real back then but now we can't tell the differences, we can tell right from wrong, everything is mixed, good with evil, light with darkness. Truth with error, well said Sir

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Dutendra Chamling 21 October 2015

Marvellous poem, Nizar Qabbani drew a door to freedom.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 March 2015

I want to weep too upon reading this poem: so powerful, so true and human in human desperation about what is happening in our world and in your own homeland, Nizar. I join with your pain and despair and yet this poem brings home a message to all the children in the world: Poetry has a voice. Poetry is also an instrument of peace in the midst of chaos, unmeasureable suffering of people caused by wars, corruption and hate. Smile and share your life and hope.

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Nizar Qabbani

Nizar Qabbani

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