Monday, May 19, 2008

A Lesson From The Heart Comments

Rating: 4.0

Wandering alone in this empty
forest of darkness, stumbling
and falling as I go wondering
if the darkness now will be
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Bonnie Collins
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Lynn Glover 02 July 2010

Bonnie, this is just an awesome poem that sent chills down my spine as I read it. You had me believeing I was living and breathing this poem. Just a great write. Lynn

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Duh Huh 24 May 2009

Wow Bonnie, this is so touching i am in awe. As always your talent is obvious in your poems. I felt this one with you also. When i started here you were one of the first poets i read and your poem stayed with me... a house needs a home too...... i was impressed then and continue to be. Very well done my friend, thank you for sharing. :)

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lady friend of mine.. this is very god quality thoughts and poetry.

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James Nall 18 February 2009

only True love speaks this way, thanx

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Anabella Casmore 13 February 2009

A true lesson from a big heart Bon! ! XD Love you! ! !

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 January 2009

Good morning Poet friend Bonnie and this is an awesome poem. I drifted in time with you and have learned some of the same lessons. Thanks for provoking thought this morning. Loyd

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Arlette Murillo 09 January 2009

Grat poem indeed, my friend. It's very true and it helps people who read it realize that even if love failed you once, at least you have had the joy of knowing how to...

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James Foulk 24 November 2008

a most beautiful piece of fine poetry.

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Heart lessons that teache our hearts. very good write 9/10

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Michael Gale 11 November 2008

Lessons are valuable, especially when the heart is involved. Great poem! Loved it! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 October 2008

A lesson from the heart...An acknowledement off the heart...well written piece 10

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Robert Sheridan 18 September 2008

Bonnie, Beautifully done - you write at a poetic level which is all too rare today...! ! Take care, Robert

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Nathaniel Booker 03 September 2008

'True love can be a lesson from the heart' This says it all Bonnie... Beautiful **10** Be Well, Nate

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Ron Flowers 27 August 2008

A wonderful poem. I especially liked the last sanza. A 10 from me. Ron

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Ron Flowers 27 August 2008

A wonderful poem. I especially liked the last sanza. A 10 from me. Ron

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James Foulk 14 August 2008

a beautiful warm, gentle touching piece of poetry.

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C. P. Sharma 13 July 2008

I enjoyed this poem. It reveals that you know the art of poetry very well. It out pors your heart. And your soul is my soul, so it is universal and vistas vast and varied but all in one. There is unity even in diversity. True love really flows from the heart and perverted mind often vitiates it. Forgiveness is the virtue that flows from heart and sustains and strengthens love. If I had to thank you for anything it would have to be for teaching me how to love, and how to forgive And how to know sometimes, True Love can be a lesson from the heart....... Thank you for sharing this beautiful thought.

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Ron Flowers 02 June 2008

This is truly a beautiful poem, a 10. Thanks for sharing.

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James Foulk 30 May 2008

this is a very beautiful poem, very touching melting the heart with everyword.

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Ashley Burnam 30 May 2008

I like this poem. Its so true on how we end up following someone elses heart. Ashley

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Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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