Wandering alone in this empty
forest of darkness, stumbling
and falling as I go wondering
if the darkness now will be
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Wow Bonnie, this is so touching i am in awe. As always your talent is obvious in your poems. I felt this one with you also. When i started here you were one of the first poets i read and your poem stayed with me... a house needs a home too...... i was impressed then and continue to be. Very well done my friend, thank you for sharing. :)
lady friend of mine.. this is very god quality thoughts and poetry.
Good morning Poet friend Bonnie and this is an awesome poem. I drifted in time with you and have learned some of the same lessons. Thanks for provoking thought this morning. Loyd
Grat poem indeed, my friend. It's very true and it helps people who read it realize that even if love failed you once, at least you have had the joy of knowing how to...
Heart lessons that teache our hearts. very good write 9/10
Lessons are valuable, especially when the heart is involved. Great poem! Loved it! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.
A lesson from the heart...An acknowledement off the heart...well written piece 10
Bonnie, Beautifully done - you write at a poetic level which is all too rare today...! ! Take care, Robert
'True love can be a lesson from the heart' This says it all Bonnie... Beautiful **10** Be Well, Nate
A wonderful poem. I especially liked the last sanza. A 10 from me. Ron
A wonderful poem. I especially liked the last sanza. A 10 from me. Ron
I enjoyed this poem. It reveals that you know the art of poetry very well. It out pors your heart. And your soul is my soul, so it is universal and vistas vast and varied but all in one. There is unity even in diversity. True love really flows from the heart and perverted mind often vitiates it. Forgiveness is the virtue that flows from heart and sustains and strengthens love. If I had to thank you for anything it would have to be for teaching me how to love, and how to forgive And how to know sometimes, True Love can be a lesson from the heart....... Thank you for sharing this beautiful thought.
this is a very beautiful poem, very touching melting the heart with everyword.
I like this poem. Its so true on how we end up following someone elses heart. Ashley
Bonnie, this is just an awesome poem that sent chills down my spine as I read it. You had me believeing I was living and breathing this poem. Just a great write. Lynn