Monday, February 6, 2006
A Lesser Copy Of God Comments
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well, just a lesser copy
of god is man
an instrument to
advance his cause
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john tiong chunghoo
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A. Michael Sears
06 February 2006
John, Wonderful images. However, I think that the first four lines are all that is necessary. The rest of it seems to take away from the beauty of man as a lesser god.
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8/20/2025 4:58:17 PM # 1.0.0
This is a wonderful poem, John...and I do think the first four lines need to be there. I like the line about a bird being easier to understand than God. Who knows His ways? Raynette