Monday, April 20, 2009

A Lesser Celandine. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Carpet of dazzling gleam and greenery.
A gift of splendour, dressed in a very
Yellowy gown, round as the midday sun,
Heart-shaped leaves, darkest of green becoming
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Fay Slimm
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You see so much beauty within and beyond. Images captured me. 'yellowy gown', 'lustrous glazes' 'daffodil challenge for golden cheer'. Your poem is exquisite. Top marks! Karin Anderson

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Sameer Ahmed 20 April 2009

A very capturing descriptoin of the beautiful plant whos heart-shaped leaves and yellow colored individually growing flowers show the splendor of the nativity of the plant. The upwelling phenomenon of the whole family i.e., buttercup family, is so attactive that it takes you very close to the nature and it authenticates the Nature with its beauty and vividness......10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Tsira Goge 20 April 2009

Fay, It's beauty, you the artist as, expensive.. 10... Tsira

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maggie murray 20 April 2009

beautiful descriptive poem...Maggie

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Catrina Heart 20 April 2009

truly wonderful poem Fay! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Gracious with words.....

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Ency Bearis 20 April 2009

it's a wonderful day..I guess..nice vivid write, you painted it well..10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 20 April 2009

Wonderful poetry for a day like this clear blue sky, gets you in the summer mood.. Andy 10

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Fiona Davidson 20 April 2009

And they certainly do bring a lovely glow don't they....wonderful write Fay....Fi 10+++

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Fay Slimm

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