Thursday, January 2, 2003

A Leppidoptera Comments

Rating: 3.3

Although it's flight is quite erratic
This dainty insect soars ecstatic
And though it seems to have no power
It effortlessly gains each flower
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John W. Knight
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Emma Kessler 19 December 2009

I loved it, I have heard butterfly poems before, but this was entirely new. Keep it up!

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Paul Hansford 16 September 2009

A delightful little poem, only marred by details - Lepidoptera has one P, and means insects as a whole, not just one individual. ITS as a possessive has no apostrophe. I can't contact you privately to say this, as I would prefer, but will happily remove criticism if you correct the points and contact me.

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John W. Knight

John W. Knight

Germantown, Maryland
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