Tuesday, August 4, 2009

A Lemon Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was only two when she taught me, how to have a pee
I was quite happy with my nappy! I guess that's womanly!
Stand up straight and listen, point Percy at the pot
Use both hands, lean forward, blessed by God, your not!
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Bob Gibson
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Brian Jani 24 May 2014

Bob Gibson I enjoyed the read

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

very hilarious and pantwettingly outrageous..an enjoyable write Sir

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 August 2009

this is very sweetttttttttttt! ! ! ! ! ! ! Nice indeed sir! ! ! I mean rhyming is so much fun... Earlier I wrote in free verse.. then wrote few rhyming ones too.. I should say rhyming is quite fun... and reading this one is so much fun than writing my oness..cause my one is all childish... this is cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! way better....entertaining.. make me wana sing...lolsssss Cheeeersssss shan

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 August 2009

Ammmmmazing poem with fine rhyme and rhythm! 10+

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Bob Gibson

Bob Gibson

Billingham County Durham
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