Feeling for the winds of yore
The old man glanced at the fabulous river.
Sitting under the shades
He screwed up his beard in reflection.
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Ravi hi yes it is a very nice poem...superbly done enjoyed it...give it a ten cheers
What a wonderful write...I can feel your emotions...marvellous10++++++++++
life is a journey. when we are thru all corners, we meet a hole in which we all go. how you impact on people will always count. i want to be a legendary traveller
Dear Ravi, I fully share your views, feelings. pain and anguish. I think we are sailing in the same boat. We are expressing similar thoughts; ofcourse in our own styles. Please take a look at my old poems: MOTHER'S PLAINT HONOURABLES But somehow I try to add some pun and satire. Your poems are serious and have great stunning imagery(Kerala helps? !) and some great traits of modern Indian poetry like good use of surrealism etc. Bravo my brother. Keep writing. I love reading them. Go stronger and stronger; we need poets like u
resonant images...a legendary tale well depicted through vivid and spectral words
i can visualize the man and his boat. true reflection and nice write voted10 surya