A Legend Of A Dandelion Comments

it's sort of a shame this poem APPEARS to have had few readers. i was looking for a poem that i thought might be here, mr. pumpkin (after noticing a pumpkin mention in your bio): so i, instead, found this wonderful one. wonderful indeed. almost, IF not, perfect, in use of english and in rhyming, both of which i appreciate greatly (but don't ALWAYS need) . maybe i need to go to our lawn in the morning and look around for mr. d! i'm in my fourth marriage now and i sometimes could use a little extra help with 'relationships'! 'I wish that you bring her back And please let it be today? ' .....at first i was going to say what's with the question mark? . then i thought a bit more and decided it can fit very nicely here. i especially liked how you arranged the words in this line: And with you to always be; ...it took a second or two to confirm that the sentence was well composed. very well! thanks for sharing. :)

This is the most inspiring poem I have ever read. Never stop writing.