a dot of affection,
is like a wave
in the heart!
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the fusion of moments...then magic was created....your poem is flawless...simply captivating
Ritty, Lovely style, good flow. I like this poem very much Tks Nooruddeen
A beautiful, magical moment, when a legend was born. I like the way of narration. A great write! I'll surely visit many times and enjoy this beautiful poetry.
'in such a moment, two dreams bonded, became true in a moment turning into a legend! ' Such a lovely moment, neither night nor day... amazing poem.
lovely...... awesome concept.... a dream...so real.... thank you.
hi ritty...namaste doing nostalgia today...dont u know its inetrnanational day for displaced persons did one atleast...; -) nice poem cheers
TO ME IT APPEARED LIKE A BEAUTIFUL DREAM SEQUENCE! THANKS! -Raj