Saturday, February 4, 2012

A Legend Comments

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Momentary glory of morning dew was lost
With the first ray of the morning Sun
Day long splendor and beauty of the flower vanished
With the sinking last ray of the evening Sun
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Spinner Parrot 13 March 2012

Wow! This is great! Absolute and outstanding poetic lines. It's highly picturesque, and it's full of imagery. Keep it up my dear bard!

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