A Legacy Of Broken Dreams (Villanelle) Comments

i can really relate to this... im not going to even seem like im someone wise and awesome.... but i feel if you ever love something its will only means to destroy..... in other words to love is to destroy.... its better to feel numb then felling so much it hurts.. i mean this just how i feel.... LOVE IS NOT AN OPTION! ! !

This is a great poem. I love the repetition and the fact that it's relatable. :)

beautiful poem, i love it

Hey, I love the poem. It was very moving.

love is never what is seems.... so true. Love the poem.

really intriguing... I loved it... thanx

A well written poem. O...thanks for the comment on mine.

this is only my second read of yours I'm a fan already. It's real it's differnt from what you'd expect somehow. Amazing. Lylyanna

Great write.... How this poem rings so true... 'Love is never what it seems'...

i love the emotion u put into this one. Adryan

That's a great poem fro' thee to we... Us poetry readers of rhyme and it's timeless art-Poetry. A ten for ye t'was scored for ye... All of your readers with me will entirely agree. Your work is good of heart... Once you begin your rhymely art. When'st in the beginning you had your inspired start... You've since done your best-Your best in part. Way to go big guy of the writing eye. Ya gotta ten for this piece of work. Great work God bless all poets-MJG.

True talent. I feel your yearning. I am remineded however of the words of some now forgotten sage; 'be mindfull for what thou beseachet the Gods, for that surely they shall giveth to thee.' I speak with the voice of experience. Kenneth

Simply marvelous. My respects Joshua, great job -R a y N-