A Leaf Refuses To Fall Comments

Beautiful piece of poetry. My favourite bit is the second stanza which brings about the image of a lone soldier staggering across a body-clogged field, still ready for a fight. After I read it, I looked out my window and spotted one single poplar leaf holding on to the branch for dear life. A flickering soldier bent on springtime. Am thoroughly enjoying your work and will continue on with reading it...

what an interesting view of nature, who ever wants to let go a good read well worth a 10

i like any poem that is about leafs. this is a good one. and i like that line 'LEAVES DON'T LET GO THAT EASILY EITHER.

Superb imagery. Leaves lend themselves to poetry.Thanks for sharing your art. As always, Sandra

This one makes me feel cold. Can't wait for spring. Its fall here now. Bob

You are getting the essence of POETRY here.

J u s t B E A U T I F U L!

another hit a spot. Thankyou.